This one's for da "closest person" in my engg lifeI lay awake in bed all night
Hoping tat things wud get alright..
I shout, I weep, I cry
Unlike da tears, these wounds wud neva dry..
It is da ambivalent games u play
Tat is making me feel this way..
I thought I was ur closest one
Nd u made me realize, I was none..
Excruciating was all da pain
But alas! It all went in vain..
Oh my dearest, I defy thee
Now, unveil da hypocrisy!
Hoping tat things wud get alright..
I shout, I weep, I cry
Unlike da tears, these wounds wud neva dry..
It is da ambivalent games u play
Tat is making me feel this way..
I thought I was ur closest one
Nd u made me realize, I was none..
Excruciating was all da pain
But alas! It all went in vain..
Oh my dearest, I defy thee
Now, unveil da hypocrisy!
14 comments:
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nice poem karthika.......though i dint get the conclusion....unveiling the hypocrisy??
neways went thru ur other posts tooo....u r a pretty gud storyteller ;-)
may ur crushes keep us busy
keep blogging!
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kekaa....burrpadu..!!nice rhymining all over!! :-)
Sometimes when we love someone,
The life we live becomes all undone,
But more tormenting becomes the pain,
Of realization it's been all in vain.
The senses are gone, the reason is lost,
The meaning to life is far out-tossed,
The reason to existence becomes a big naught,
Our helpless soul can do nothing but rot,
To love somebody may seem easy at first,
But the pain, the agony, there's no end to this thirst !
Good one there, Could feel the emotions attached...Keep writing...
nice touching poem...!
but an easier title wud'v been better for souls like me..! phanatesamograrila....??? huhhhhh!!!!
beautiful...
gud one! well put!
Cheers!!
i guess it deserves a lil more...!
its really a gud one! an unforgiving direct piece..! slash!
good nicely framed poem...
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Hi..
poem was really gud..
didn't know you cud write..
:)
keep up the good work
excuse me my dear lil sister... can u stop using such complicated titles for ur blog.. it gets difficult for ppl like me :D
Just eliminate the expectation factor from life and see the magic.
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